seems okay but from what i can tell the only thing you'll be able to use her for, as she sits right now is ero stuff. i think if you want her to be more popular you need to give her a bit more work. the likes and dislikes section seems to be written by the character herself rather than the omnipresent perspective like the rest of the bio. lastly, while certainly cute, the character has more of the 'girl next door' vibe rather than the 'naturally aloof' you seem to be aiming for. imo i think you should give her a more disheveled look, mess up her hair a bit, scuff a corner of her clothes to show wear (from tripping/falling etc) and round out her face a bit. but again that's just my opinion
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This is soooooooo badass, I like it! Is she new or have you been working on her for awhile?